Importance of performance management and measurement systems in ADNOC

Please find the attached (guideline, structure, rubric) file it contains details for everything related to the paper, in this file the highlighted part is the scope of the paper that is (Critically assess the importance of performance management and measurement systems in relation to adoption and implementation of continuous improvement initiatives such as Total Quality Management (TQM). Support your answer with evidence from a MENA- or UAE-based private or public sector organization). The organization I chose is Abu Dhabi National Oil Company (ADNOC). I have attached additional comments received from the professor regarding the previous paper with the same guidelines, take it into consideration such as adding literature review, tackle HR and strategic performance and etc. besides, please follow my style of writing I have attached a draft.